The core of your writing while appearing reasonable in the beginning, did not settle well with me after some time. Someplace throughout the paragraphs you actually were able to make me a believer but only for a very short while. I still have got a problem with your jumps in logic and you might do well to fill in all those gaps. When you can accomplish that, I will surely end up being amazed.
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